Fic: Fallout (West Wing, 1/1)

Apr 20, 2009 19:08

Title: Fallout
Fandom: The West Wing
Character: Abigail Bartlet, Jed Bartlet
Table: #5
Prompt: #69. Piss
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG
Summary: He's an old man with a disease, and his wife is pissed at him. (Post -Ep for The Wake-up Call)

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fanfic: the west wing, abbey bartlet, 100 situations, the west wing, jed bartlet

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ariestess April 20 2009, 19:25:12 UTC
Nice piece! I like that there is still that connection between them, even when they're angry...

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melanie_anne April 21 2009, 17:40:36 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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vulcanicity April 21 2009, 20:11:42 UTC
Hmm. I could have sworn I left a comment for this at midnight last night, LOL. Or it may have been on ff.net. IDK. I may not have even amde the comment (see: I was tired. It was midnight. I was meant to be in bed. LOL).

But yeah. Amazing. They are such a brilliant couple.

He opens the door. Abbey is hunched forward over the sink; her entire body shakes with the force of her sobs. Jed closes the distance between them and pulls her into his arms. He holds her until she stops crying, ignoring his own tears.
I love this bit! ♥

Good job!

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melanie_anne April 22 2009, 06:46:40 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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vulcanicity April 22 2009, 15:27:42 UTC
:)

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