Comments | melanie_anne: Fic: Variations on a Theme (West Wing)

melanie_anne

Fic: Variations on a Theme (West Wing)

Feb 26, 2008 08:44

Title: Variations on a Theme
Fandom: The West Wing
Character: Abigail Bartlet, Jed Bartlet, Zoey Bartlet
Table: #5
Prompt: #30. Tour
Word Count: 500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "You know I'll get lost with you anytime you like." (Pre-series.)

Table O' Fic

( Abbey envisions CJ trying to put a spin on President Lost in White House )

zoey bartlet, fanfic: the west wing, abbey bartlet, 100 situations, jed bartlet

Comments 6

raptor47 February 26 2008, 14:16:53 UTC

You're writing TWW again! I love the banter between the president and the first lady. (I especially like that you briefly snuck Leo in there as well -- he's my favorite.)

melanie_anne February 26 2008, 14:56:16 UTC

Leo's lovely. I have such a soft spot for him. :)

morethanexist February 27 2008, 01:59:23 UTC

They make me laugh. For a second I thought this was for the minis challenge. It fits for this week's too.

melanie_anne February 27 2008, 06:27:49 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

ladyvader2 March 2 2008, 02:42:04 UTC

Awww, YAYS. I concur with the first comment about the fact that you're writing TWW again. THIS SERIES OF YOURS IS SO MUCH LOVE. I've read them on ff.net and here, and I've JUST finished reading them all again, and you know what? IT GIVES ME THE WARM FUZZIES EVERYTIME and now I've got this SILLY GRIN plastered on my face. You write Jed/Abbey wonderfully. I'm a writer and one of my hangups with writing West Wing, no matter how badly I want to, is the fact that I just can't really get into the character(s) just because of how brilliant a show it is/was and that's intimidating to me, so I can't ever seem to write anything for it. But YOU, my dear, your style of writing is AMAZING. And I love it so much especially your Jed/Abbey stuff. I love it how even when I'm reading pre-series Jed/Abbey I STILL feel like I could be reading series Jed/Abbey, though younger. Because even though they ARE younger, the way that you write for them is brilliant, I mean just SO in character, in my opinion. I think that's why I love it so much. Because it's ( ... )

melanie_anne March 2 2008, 10:06:28 UTC

Your review has absolutely made my day. :) I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this series so much and I really appreciate the time you've taken to leave feedback. Thanks so much.