Author's Notesmel_makoroAugust 24 2010, 19:15:29 UTC
This came to me very suddenly, and I wrote it up on the spur of the moment. That's probably why it sounds like a rough draft. Or so my inner critic tells me. That happens a lot. :P
Oddly enough, this was inspired by a discussion on Serenes Forest that's likely buried now under some other topic (I don't even remember the topic title under which I found said discussion). Someone had translated a base conversation from FE12, wherein the My Unit character listens to Elice's views on her younger brother, Marth. One talk with myself later, and the next thing I knew, I was writing what I'd written above.
I wouldn't call it a poem, as I didn't think of it as such when I wrote it, but I formatted it to be like one for aesthetic reasons. I won't stop anyone from arguing to the contrary, though. I hope you enjoyed it regardless.
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Oddly enough, this was inspired by a discussion on Serenes Forest that's likely buried now under some other topic (I don't even remember the topic title under which I found said discussion). Someone had translated a base conversation from FE12, wherein the My Unit character listens to Elice's views on her younger brother, Marth. One talk with myself later, and the next thing I knew, I was writing what I'd written above.
I wouldn't call it a poem, as I didn't think of it as such when I wrote it, but I formatted it to be like one for aesthetic reasons. I won't stop anyone from arguing to the contrary, though. I hope you enjoyed it regardless.
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