Okay, so I want an opinion

[mel_girl]

So I'm writing an original fic, right? http://mel-girl.livejournal.com/9153.html If you see this entry you may get it. In any case, I wrote some and haven't decided some things.

1) Whether to make this the prologue or part of a full chapter.
2) Whether to post it on SPPF, fictionpress or what.
3) Whether it's actually good enough for people to want to

Comments

[nicole_may]

I suggest you place any original stories you write on FictionPress before anywhere else.

For security purposes... you don't want people stealing...

As for the story itself, it's quite interesting, I just noticed you like to abuse Japanese names... if the setting is somewhere in Japan or a fictional place somewhere in Japan, it's fine, but it's outside of Japan, that might not be a good idea... it feels very akward to someone who reads it and isn't an anime fan.

[mel_girl]

Okay, I got a fictionpress account so that can be easily done~

And indeed. :(

LOL, that I do. Yuh, it's got a Japanese-ish setting and when we see how Tsuchiko-kun is doing in future, he'll be in a Japanese school setting.

Thanks for your comments. 8D

[nicole_may]

That's good then.

Yeah, some people these days like to plagiarize.

And you're welcome...

[mel_girl]

Yay! <3

Yes, I like Tohru, he'll definitely appear more in future, but when he gets his moment of spotlight, he'll be caught up in some big mess. 8D And you can then see how he's changed in future too. XD

And yeah, Shizenko was too tired to be overly bitchy. :x She was kinda down and uncaring at the time though she'll probably be cursing after Tohru's gone. XDD

I did say in the centre of the forest, I think. I checked, I did. Meh, I was mostly focusing on the points going on between Tohru and Shizenko and caputirng the mood and dynamic between the two and also noting Tsuchiko into the matter of things. Tsuchiko would've made a cute baby. :3 :3

Thanks for your comments!

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*plonks*

[shychloe]

I post some of my original stuff on writingoforums.com they don't allow fan fics but still a good writing community and really friendly too. =D

You should give sppf and fictionpress a try too.

[tadashi_chan]

Well now, whoever suggested fictionpress is a smart cookie. If you can make it there, you can make it anywhere. Except maybe SPPf's non-shipping fic place. That place scares me, man...

Mel, I do think that your story has the potential to turn into something unique and interesting, so keep at it. You're a very good author for your age, and you'll only get better with age ^^

Luck~ 83