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mel0804

Obscurity

Oct 04, 2007 15:55

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. With this story I wanted to dive in the dark side of Brokeback Mountain. I wanted to experiment with fear, uncertainty and doubt. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this ( Read more... )

obscurity (in english)

Comments 33

kmdlrd October 4 2007, 20:54:45 UTC

So glad to see this updated. It is hard to read. Such pain and despair in both of their lives. Hopefully they can help each other. Thanks - B

mel0804 October 9 2007, 18:14:59 UTC

I admit - it was also hard to write because it was very painful to imagine my most loved men in such a despair and loneliness...

caij October 4 2007, 20:58:35 UTC

Hoi Mel,

Wiedermal eine wunderbare geschichte,die ich jetzt auf englisch lesen kann.
Danke dir und deine betas naturlich auch.

Liefs Carolien

mel0804 October 9 2007, 18:15:37 UTC

Hi, Carolien,

ich freue mich, dass Du hier auch mitliest ;-) !

LG
Mel

Obscurity. anonymous October 4 2007, 21:43:58 UTC

Great first two chapters, really enjoyed it, waiting for the next update already, many thanks.

Re: Obscurity. mel0804 October 9 2007, 18:16:03 UTC

You are welcome !
I'm glad you liked it.

sweetje October 4 2007, 22:56:28 UTC

Ennis needs to loosen up a little around Jack. He needs companionship and Jack wants to oblige, but he is too shy to make the first move. And Jack is a bit scared of everything since his attack. I hope something happens soon to change these two men's lives for the better. They could both benefit from a special friendship.

Wonderful chapter. I enjoyed reading it. : )
Debra

mel0804 October 9 2007, 18:16:59 UTC

I can only agree with you ;-).
And all this will happen within the next chapters...

jetd_always October 5 2007, 06:15:34 UTC

What an oppressive and dark world these two live in , I love it . You have a great gift for making us feel each of their pain and sadness at being alone . Just fantastic writing Mel ! Looking forward , as usual to your next installment .

Thanks so much ,
Lisa

mel0804 October 9 2007, 18:19:21 UTC

Hi, Lisa,

as always I'm so glad you liked it ! It's the best compliment a writer can get to know that the readers feel the emotions the writer wanted to evoke ;-). I'm really happy it worked in this chapter and I hope it will work in all the following, too...

Thank you for reading !
Mel