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mel0804

Obscurity

Aug 28, 2007 23:29

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. With this story I wanted to dive in the dark side of Brokeback Mountain. I wanted to experiment with fear, uncertainty and doubt. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this ( Read more... )

obscurity (in english)

Comments 39

madbottoms August 28 2007, 21:44:14 UTC

Intense! Holding out for the next one now and off to read Beauty & the Beast.

Sandy

mel0804 September 2 2007, 00:27:46 UTC

Hey - I'm glad to see you reading this story, too...
Thank you !

caij August 28 2007, 22:11:09 UTC

wow,your third one this evening,great.
But you can't leave us hanging after this,not too long,please.

And many,many thanks to your translater (don't know if i spell that right)tizi17.

Liefs Carolien

mel0804 September 2 2007, 00:29:23 UTC

Yes, it's tizi - and she told me she will work on chapter 2 this weekend. But give her some time - the chapters here are a little bit longer than the chapters you are used to with "Fated" and "The Beauty and the Beast" ;-).

Thanks for reading !!

sweetje August 28 2007, 22:50:05 UTC

This is going to be another intresting story. I'm looking forward to what happens next. I'm anxious to see where Ennis comes in now that I believe Jack is the victim, and K.E. is one of the attackers.
Great start. : )
Debra

mel0804 September 2 2007, 00:29:58 UTC

Uhmmm - did you read the German version :-))?

sweetje September 2 2007, 07:11:38 UTC

No. I'm afraid I can't read German well enough to understand it. I'm looking forward to your English version though. I really love this story. : )
Debra

samtyr August 28 2007, 23:47:07 UTC

Wow, this is really great. I am so glad that you are continuing this. You have very strong language and images that stay with a person. Thank you for sharing this.

mel0804 September 2 2007, 00:30:43 UTC

Thank you for reading it ;-).
I'm really glad you liked it, because I lost my heart to this story...

Obscurity greatmtn August 29 2007, 00:09:23 UTC

Mel, this was a really rough start to your story. Well done descriptions but I don't know if I can read much more. Hopefully gets less rough in future chapters.

thanks

greatmtn

Re: Obscurity mel0804 September 2 2007, 00:32:25 UTC

No, there won't be any violence in the following chapters - but all in all it's a dark story with very tender moments between Ennis and Jack.