The less I say about finals, the better. Um. Distract me, please? I want to write Pepper/Tony, but I don't know what to write, exactly. So, uh... prompts, I guess? Give me a
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you are safe! FOR NOW.mekosuchinaeMay 9 2008, 03:37:51 UTC
"Please tell me why I'm doing this," Pepper says. Her cell-phone crackles once, in counterpoint to Tony's laugh. The wall before her is an incomprehensible jumble of color and gloss, each cover brighter than the one beside it.
"Seriously," she says. "What am I even looking for?"
Tony grunts. On the far end of the line something crashes. Pepper bites her lip.
"Keep looking," he says. "I guarantee you'll know it when you see it."
"If you're busy--"
"No, no," he says, and if he's winded, the static hides his breathing well. "I'm good. Just, uh, tell me when you see it, okay?"
"See what, Tony? You still haven't told me--"
She sees it. There on the third shelf down, the fourth book in a row of seven, hotrod red and unmistakeable.
"Oh, my God," she says. "Is that you?"
"I'm flattered," Tony says.
"Tony," she says, "you're on a comic book"Mind-boggling, I know," he says. "What with this whole super hero secret identity thing
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I love how this is the closest thing to porn I've written in, like, three years. Two years? When did Kingdom Hearts 2 come out? Anyway, A WHILE. Thank you, RDJ!
Re: second response. i totally stole your idea. please do not hate me?destroMay 10 2008, 05:26:04 UTC
The woman laughs and Pepper looks without really meaning to, just long enough to see Tony press his lips to her throat, mouth open, teeth scraping her skin. Pepper turns away.
Re: second response. i totally stole your idea. please do not hate me?dorkorificMay 11 2008, 02:22:35 UTC
ok so i came over here randomly via del.icio.us, and holy moly, dude. i was totally jonesing for something exactly like this--it's so exquisitely hot and in-character and sharp and funny. just perfect. i could absolutely 100% see it in my head, and it was a really happy place for my head to be. this goes for all three of these ficlets, but this one is possibly my favorite because, well, nnnaughh.
so in sum, wonderful job--i will definitely be creepily checking this post for updates!
So that is basically the most amazing thing anyone has ever said to me. Thank you so much! I am super-glad you enjoyed it and I am still kind of flaily over your comment, and by 'kind of,' I mean 'kind of totally.' ♥ ♥ ♥
ahahah well it was totally true! in fact, it might even have been an understatement, since i didn't mention how i can completely HEAR them in my head also. plus it continues to be true, cause you just keep hitting them out of the park. i'm just so delighted i get to read these.
third response.mekosuchinaeMay 11 2008, 16:53:15 UTC
Tony smells of: scotch and vodka, cigarette smoke, sex. The top button of his shirt is out and the next two are misaligned, the second in the third loop and the third against his chest. Pepper doesn't ask
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Re: third response.destroMay 11 2008, 19:53:59 UTC
The style on this one is aces, but oh holy god:
She smells faintly of smoke and sweat and scotch and Tony, and when she breathes him in, she thinks she can smell the sharp, cold scent of metal underneath it all.
That was one delicious gut punch, ma'am.
Cripes, I think you were made to write them, I swear.
"Seriously," she says. "What am I even looking for?"
Tony grunts. On the far end of the line something crashes. Pepper bites her lip.
"Keep looking," he says. "I guarantee you'll know it when you see it."
"If you're busy--"
"No, no," he says, and if he's winded, the static hides his breathing well. "I'm good. Just, uh, tell me when you see it, okay?"
"See what, Tony? You still haven't told me--"
She sees it. There on the third shelf down, the fourth book in a row of seven, hotrod red and unmistakeable.
"Oh, my God," she says. "Is that you?"
"I'm flattered," Tony says.
"Tony," she says, "you're on a comic book"Mind-boggling, I know," he says. "What with this whole super hero secret identity thing ( ... )
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I'm so ridiculously glad you liked it. ♥
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That is just so crazy hot, I can't even.
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so in sum, wonderful job--i will definitely be creepily checking this post for updates!
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So that is basically the most amazing thing anyone has ever said to me. Thank you so much! I am super-glad you enjoyed it and I am still kind of flaily over your comment, and by 'kind of,' I mean 'kind of totally.' ♥ ♥ ♥
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ps i totally friended you omg.
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Have you thought on continuing it??? Or maybe writing more Iron Man fics
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Thank you!
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"You said that yesterday," Pepper says, rapping her fingernails against the folder, "and you still haven't--"
"--and I'm saying it now - make a note - so please, don't rush me."
This? Made me giggle.
Great job! Thanks!
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She smells faintly of smoke and sweat and scotch and Tony, and when she breathes him in, she thinks she can smell the sharp, cold scent of metal underneath it all.
That was one delicious gut punch, ma'am.
Cripes, I think you were made to write them, I swear.
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