changsoo | 大好きだよ (read; daisuki da yo)

May 12, 2012 13:56

Title: 大好きだよ (read; daisuki da yo)
Pairing: Changmin / Sooyoung
Genre: slice of life, romance
Rating: G

wordcount: 2140

the only things exchanged are momentary things like brief smiles and awkward waves )

fandom:dbskjyj, pairing:changmin/sooyoung, pairing:kris/sooyoung, fandom:exo, fandom:snsd

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bamthegreat May 12 2012, 10:29:53 UTC
my spot! askjdhnkajfnkjjhfunflgkj

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bamthegreat May 12 2012, 10:51:12 UTC
i'm gonna like, comment per part that hits me okay? ILYYYYYYYYYYYYY

1. Well. She thinks he is a very attractive member of the human species. dsjhghskjababnlhfciwjhnwoihwoitjaopkgoapkgah okay it's just the first part of the shot yet and I'm going crazy already ;A

2. When Im Yoona entered the picture, is the answer Sooyoung hears one afternoon after a painfully empty chemistry class. She expects to hurt, only she doesn’t and the whole world just seems a bit more empty. OUCH. Okay fine. It's like you baked me an enormous fruit-topped cake and then you stomped on it just when I was about to take a slice ;AAA;

3. There are also promises and future plans. Some of which survive and some which fall through and dissolve in summer rain. Sooyoung ends up standing in front of Changmin in the middle of all the other students, “Hi,” she says, breathless all of a sudden ( ... )

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mekimigure May 12 2012, 11:28:05 UTC
So ... I'll be replying to everything. omg another essay orz

1. that line was cute, yeah. Like, it's the kind of thing you've think to yourself when you're half in denial and a quarter accepting and another quarter trying to be a good student.

2. I'm sorry about the fruitcake, but we did get like, strawberries and apple slices and sunflower tea at the end so all is well?

3. that graduation scene was ... idk, I imagined it and just wrote it okay? ;A;

4. tbh, I'm not incredibly fond of SooKris, but I found them endearing here. what is with my characters creating lives of their own. And well, this was semi-inspired by a situation I observed but generally, it was brought about by that whole concept of could have been but didnt (omg i dont make sense). And well, sometimes things happen, and you have to 'prioritise' over what are two equally important things and things just don't turn out right. There are clashes in values and garhh idek ( ... )

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bamthegreat May 12 2012, 10:51:29 UTC
6. The concept of “over-qualifying” is a frustrating one. HAHAHAHAHAHA I certainly know what this feels like. It's frustrating and depressing and can even be suicide-inducing if one isn't strong enough. :|

7. Sooyoung gets Changmin’s number from Yoona and she invites him out for coffee. She swears to herself that this is to purely thank him, and not for romantic reasons.

She secretly hopes for romantic things to happen. I know I should be happy but a part of me was shouting "HOW ABOUT KRIS?!" HAHAHAHAHA OMG WHAT IS THIS? klajksalfhjaskhkgaogkjal

8. “In America?” Sooyoung remembers the emptiness, but it wasn’t necessarily about missing him, “a little.” Not all.
He holds her hand tighter. OH MY GOD MY HEART I... I DON'T THINK I CAN MANAGE TO READ THE REST WITHOUT MY HEART BREAKING ;A;

9. She finds out about Miyoung and pokes fun at him for getting involved with a “noona”. OHMYGOD KRISFANY HAHAHAHAHAHAH OHMYGOD. OKAY. My heart is somewhat healed though not entirely. asfnkjafn IDK I just thought there must be something more and that ( ... )

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falsefallacy May 12 2012, 11:42:43 UTC
Spot! :") Will read when I finish stuff :") Here, have a preliminary waffle: ( >’-’ )>#

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mekimigure May 12 2012, 11:49:03 UTC
/nibbles waffle

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falsefallacy June 17 2012, 01:48:04 UTC
Oh Michelle! I suddenly remembered this fic and then I remembered I had work and then fuck it, I'm reading this again and then here I am. Oh Meks! Why SooKris ended that fast? Then there's the Changmin character that sounds so rare, I want to keep that character in the fandom forever! :3 Michelle, you're a genius!

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mekimigure June 17 2012, 02:09:02 UTC
I was wondering when you'd wander over again haha
and idk, SooKris just felt destined for that kind of ending? Changmin is precious forever tbh
thank you dear ^^

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kirakirashahida August 23 2012, 04:53:26 UTC
There are also promises and future plans. Some of which survive and some which fall through and dissolve in summer rain. Sooyoung ends up standing in front of Changmin in the middle of all the other students, “Hi,” she says, breathless all of a sudden.

He looks down at her, one of the handful of guys who are taller than her, the giant of a girl. “Hi,” he replies, gorgeous smile included.

Sooyoung suspects that she’s supposed to say nice things and wish him well in whatever he intends to do with his life. Instead, she asks him to never forget about her. It is stupid, it makes no sense, but somehow, even if she’s going to leave South Korea behind on jet engines and aeroplane wings, she’d like somebody to remember her.

He tells her okay and she wonders if he is being honest.

Cues ugly sobbings because this is beautiful.

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mekimigure August 24 2012, 11:59:54 UTC
/holds you

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