A Ticket Home (fic)

[meilin_miranda]

Cross-posted at Teaspoon

Title: A Ticket Home
Author: MeiLin
Rating: R
Characters: Jack Harkness, Shae Han/Miss Dexter (original character), Francine Jones, The Master
Pairings: Master/Shae
Disclaimer: The Beeb owns everyone in here, and a good chunk of me too, apparently. Except Shae! I own Shae! OK I partly own her!

Summary: The

Comments

[eumenidis]

Oh, please don't allow yourself to be demoralized, mi amica. We are all our own harshest critics, which is as it should be I suppose, but be aware of your own strengths. You write clear, precise prose, realistic characters & situations, & you have a clear, unsentimental understanding of the dynamics of the characters & their situations. There are many *professional* novelists who don't write anything approaching as well as you.

Speaking of characterization: Shae working for the Master--talk about self-defeating! Her arrogance & stubbornness (& perhaps some shame?) are certainly combining to hoist her high. Thinking of what's going to happen to her doesn't just make my skin crawl, it gets up & walks...

[eumenidis]

Thanks, you relieve my mind; I thought I was missing what was right in front of me. Brain *is* rusty, though; just hope it's not rusted through

[meilin_miranda]

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down!