Eternal - Chapter 12

Sep 10, 2011 11:02


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yunho_ism September 10 2011, 11:14:11 UTC
SPOT!!!

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meheartyunho September 11 2011, 12:19:47 UTC
yours!

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yunho_ism September 12 2011, 11:44:08 UTC
i'm glad yunho seems to be more in control of himself now.
but i wonder if it would really be like what chun said,
taking years for them to fully adjust to their new selves.
yoosu sure had a terrible past.
but it's good they were able to find comfort in each other.
will they be back soon? or will yunjae be on their own for a while? :O
can't wait for the next chap.
thanks for the update.<3

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ladyelhisa September 10 2011, 11:26:02 UTC
SPOTTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ladyelhisa September 11 2011, 01:13:27 UTC
OMG! Yoosu had a very terrible past... I do feel quite...glad that they became vampires at that..at least they found each other.

I like the progress of the story.. :) You've got to know more about the characters, their weaknesses and their strengths.

I LOVE YOU FOR THE UPDATE!

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meheartyunho September 11 2011, 12:20:57 UTC
I know right, but it is what shapes them, what makes them them and somehow makes their relationship stronger in a way ^^
Thank you hun, I'm so scared to bore you guys T.T <3

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yunhos September 10 2011, 11:39:23 UTC
SPOT! ♥
bbl to read :3

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meheartyunho September 11 2011, 12:22:52 UTC
weee ^-^

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yunhos September 11 2011, 18:44:14 UTC
gosh, this chapter was sad! D: i feel so sorry for yoosu and their past...
i guess this shows yunjae how lucky they are compared to yoochun and junsu. i'm glad that their strengths and weaknesses showed through clearly here, as in a way, it strengthens their bond in the way that they're openly accepting each others' flaws. i'm glad that their love has deepened even more :3

thank you for the update! ^^

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meheartyunho September 12 2011, 15:43:26 UTC
It was filled with tragic memories, very true D: But that is what I like to write for some reason, angst and drama XD And romance of course meheh <3
Yes, these two really need to know how lucky they are with each other, it's so easy to forget D:
Thank you for commenting hun <3

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yukimiya87 September 10 2011, 13:35:03 UTC
I love how both of them compliments each other. Both accepted their own strengths and weaknesses and I kind of agreed with Junsu here. They're truly in-love.

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meheartyunho September 11 2011, 13:17:08 UTC
Thank youu hun! ^^ I'm glad that the characters are fairly clear to my readers, to me that is what makes a story <3 Thank you for commenting! :D

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unknowntibidip September 10 2011, 13:39:05 UTC
Spot~ and I won't forget to read it this time LOL /bricked <3

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unknowntibidip September 10 2011, 21:07:55 UTC
I'm glad you wrote about Yoochun and Junsu's stories, though it was really sad =(
Well, this chapter was sad overall anyway. It must be really hard for them all. But I'm glad Jaejoong Yunho have each other. Their love was really deep before but it's even more than that now.

Thanks for this new chapter <3

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meheartyunho September 18 2011, 15:57:52 UTC
I really seem to have a thing for the sad stories haha xD It makes it all the more interesting! :D But yes this really is how I see the fic in my head when I write it. Darkness, frustration and confusiong, it's bound to affect my writing ^^; But it's supposed to be a very dark fic so I guess I've succeeded haha. Thank you so much, I get so happy when you like what I write <3

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meheartyunho September 11 2011, 14:52:41 UTC
hahah it's fine hun <33

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