Eternal - Chapter 9

Mar 22, 2011 21:04


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yunhos March 22 2011, 20:28:48 UTC
SPOOOT!

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yunhos March 22 2011, 20:44:14 UTC
omo, yoochun arrives! ^^
the yunjae was intensely hot, bb!
over-protective!yunho is love... ♥
i can't wait to see what happens next!

p.s: will junsu or changmin make an appearance anytime soon? ;D

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meheartyunho March 24 2011, 17:04:48 UTC
Ahhh it's my girlie~
Ohohoh thank youu! It was so much fun to write, I love it when I get into a mood and everyhting just flows~ It did when I wrote their first time mihiihi <3

Haha I won't tell youuu, what' the point of reading if I'm just going to tell you everything, sweetie? :DD love you for commenting! <3

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hyun_tho March 22 2011, 20:40:55 UTC
CRAAAAAZY JAE. 8D

not a physco, but a killer ;__;

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meheartyunho March 26 2011, 10:02:37 UTC
Hahah aww he can't control it! The poor thing, don't judge him too hard! :D thank you for readingg <3

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ouji March 22 2011, 20:45:08 UTC
SPOT 8)

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ouji March 23 2011, 00:29:30 UTC
OMIGODSUN IT'S YOOCHUNNIE!!!~ 8D (squishes)
the flow of the story is indeed very intriguing dear!~ and yes Jaejoong SHOULD be disappointed and pissed that his yunnie went limp! >8D the only thing confusing my guess was either jaejoong was following yoochun's scent all the way or human scent when he couldn't stop himself? does this mean he likes yoochun's blood?!?!!? o____O???

gawd i can't wait for all the more vampire smut that's going to happen >:D i almost thought there was no other familar character in all of this *_____* but now there's yoochun and it's bringing my hopes up that the other familar people will be there too 8)

also, whether it be a few weeks, months, years(hopefully not) that you update again, i'll never know and it'll still be awesome in my eyes lol xD

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meheartyunho March 26 2011, 10:08:22 UTC
Hhaha yes it issss!! I love surprising you guys with these twists >DD moahahh! Oh trust me, he's more than disappointed xDD

Ahaaa~ That I won't tell you, but if it's still not clear a few chaps ahead I'll let people know~ ;]

Aww thank you hun! :D It will probably take a while ;_; <3

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kokoromiya7 March 22 2011, 21:03:46 UTC
You're baaaack !!! ♥
So Yoochun is in da place now, and he is a vampire too ! But damn, he ruined YunJae sex time XD Jaejoong wants blood, right ?

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meheartyunho March 26 2011, 10:09:35 UTC
I am, but now I'm leaving again! XD
Like every vampire he wants blood yesh~ x]

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blu_eyezz March 22 2011, 21:23:23 UTC
omg for some reason I knew Yoochun was gonna make an appearance ^^ So was it him that both YunJae were attracted to or jus blood?

I love how you describe the couple... their new appearance and their emotions for each other!Love protective!Yun and impulsive!Jae. They balance each other out ^^
I never really expected the twist in the last chapter.I thought it was like another cliche story (no offense ^^;;) but I still read it cause I love your fics ♥ sorry I didnt comment before! This is getting so interesting!I love vampire!fics ^^

Cant wait for the next update :)

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meheartyunho March 26 2011, 13:11:49 UTC
Wah! How?! XD You psychic, you! How scary, what do you think will happen in the next chap? ;D

Owh thank youu. Probably cause I really love writing it, I can't enough of this couple, seriously. Ah~ True love is the best thing ever between yunjae <3 And protective Yunho is my ultimate orgasm XD

Hahah another cliché story XD Yeah I know what you mean, though the cliché ones are fun to write, reading them aren't the best. But I reall wanted to write something beautiful with a twist. And vampires have always been beautiful to me, so has yunjae and a deep love between them :) I wanted to write something a bit different, but likeable!

Aww thank you hun, and it's ok that you never commented before! <3

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