"Bad+Pathos" - [FIC] -completed!-

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And now I'm going to hitch a ride on the Waaaambulance to see why my muse took me down such an alley. o.o'

Title: Bad+Pathos
Rating: T for language and confusion
Pairing: LaviYuu
Fandom: D.Gray-Man

Comments

[harmony283]

*FINALLY gets LJs comment thingie to work* I dunno why it wasn't working before but-but *it kept logging her out XP*

Now then...like I told you over MSN I LOVE the way you ended this. It fits very well with the theme of the piece and doesn't really...I mean yeah it's sad but if it was anything else it wouldn't fit *nod* remember Frankenstein and his monster? NEH? NEH?

now for favorite lines: Except Lavi wasn't cold at all. And he was looking at him questioningly, expectantly-- almost kind of pleasantly, and he didn't like it because it was too forward, too certain of things to come, and he really just wanted to end it before it began.

And of course...Lavi's boxers XD *snicker* That was epic awesome XD HULA GIRLS

Okay yeah

*cough* I'm done now~

Though yes. A SEQUEL IS IN ORDER 8D

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-slaps LJ with a mackerel- 8D

-and intense hugs because you help me so muuuuuch- <33

I'm glad you like the ending, really! ;-; Because at first I was kinda balking at it, going "But that's SAD", but it.. was how the story wanted to end, I guess, because it practically wrote itself. Which I'm happy for, because if it had ended on a sweet&sugary note, it would look like Frankenstein, as we said. -and the image is so very scary- D8

But yes, I'm happy you like it. Very, very happy. ^^

Ahh, that line? ...I was happy about that one too! -clings- And it had lots of italics in it, too. XD -abuses italics, but-

Hehe, boxers. I couldn't see Lavi having boring underwear, you know? XD Kanda would probably go for solids, and maybe Lavi would to a certain degree, but I mean, he would be the one to have more fun with it. -nods-

A SEQUEL INDEED. But of course, you know all about that. XDD -hugs-

[hakasha]

ooooooooooo at last, this is finished! it was so nice.... b-but the ending... the ending... Lavi... *sniff* This definitely needs a sequel. Can I haz sequel? I wantz sequel. Kanda wants sequel too, Kanda is sad! T.T

I really liked Kanda's reaction to the whole thing, it was very Kanda-ish. But I wonder what exactly Lavi was thinking during the whole thing...?

But the end... *sniff* it was in tune with the rest of the fic, that (to me, at least...) had this very calm feeling to it... but I still wantz a sequel. *_____* pwease?

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Thank youuu! ^^ I'm really happy you like it, eh? Even if it's not.. the happiest story in the world, but.. XD -hugs!-

And yes, Kanda is sad, very sad! ;-; But no worries, for I am writing a sequel (and possibly even a 3-parter) to clear some things up a bit.

Eeee, thank you! I always love comments on characterization. It's one of the most important things to consider when writing fics, so I'm seriously happy you think so. ^^ -shines-

BUT YES. SEQUEL is coming soon! In the next two weeks, hopefully.. Depending on crazy things get during the holidays. But I have an idea in my mind, and I'm gonna run with it~ XD

-more hugs for your kindness- <33