Theme #42 -- Standing Still (er, sitting XD)

Nov 06, 2009 21:40


And here it is! ::sparkles::

I must say, I... um, am very proud of it. And again, I thank 
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harmony283 November 7 2009, 05:16:39 UTC
*is currently very dead tired* D'hurr...so sorry if this doesn't make much sense (I'm literally fell asleep lying on the floor in front of my laptop. Yeaaah...early bedtime. Oh yes)

*cough* but anyway~ I'm glad I motivated you enough to work on this XD Annnd...

what you added on *snicker* I'm glad my advice helped (but that you added your own little twist to it as well) *with the whole ticklish thing*

...I adored the last line, as well. the heart CAN definitely be a heavy thing *nod, nod*

I'll probably elongate this when I'm reasonably coherent (which is obviously not now) so...yeah. Just wanted to comment since I saw this XD and I definitely can't wait to see the rest~~ AnD GOOD LUCK (obviously)~~~

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meggle_star November 7 2009, 05:35:18 UTC
::tackleglomp:: XD I'm happy you read it!! Today is a very good day~~ er, night? Since it's 12:31 over here.

And... thank you very much! I am feeling-- so, so much better than I was, seriously. I'm really happy about posting it. ^^

!!! I look forward to seeing the extension of.. that reply up there. *points!* For I always enjoy what you have to say! Plus, I should post that other theme soon.. This weekend, maybe, depending on how much stuff I have to do around the house. ::excited about that one too~~::

But YAY! It's great to be able to post things again! ::sparkles::

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hakasha November 10 2009, 03:53:30 UTC
thanks for adding me, I was dying to comment on this~

you have a really nice writing style, did you know that? really wonderful to read. ^^

this lil' ficcie was funny but also meaningful and insightful in some parts, like the three last paragraphs for instance (I particularly like the third to last one, when Lavi thinks "With each stitch, he visualized himself getting closer to Kanda, the mixed threads of the Order and the Bookman clan pulling them tighter and tighter together with every conflict." such a nice line, me thinks. xD)

so yeah, this definitely deserves a thumbs up and a "nice job" stamp on it xD and I'll gladly read moar, hehehehe~

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meggle_star November 10 2009, 04:12:12 UTC
Hey, thanks a lot! It always means a lot to me when people comment on a fic, y'know? I mean... wow! ^^ Especially considering I'm not all that confident about it sometimes.

Ahh, that line! :'D I thought it fit in really well with what was going on, like... I was thinking on the very first thing that caused them to meet, and it was conflict. So once I took that and kinda.. ran with it, it made more sense? XD

Wow, thank you so much!! <3 I'm currently working on more themes (which was what that one story was) so you should see them pretty soon. I'm going to try and post 10 at a time! >D

But.. thank you for reading, and I hope to see/hear more from you! and thank youuu! Comment anytime on anything, okay? <33

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panda_pon January 13 2010, 07:49:36 UTC
This...made me so, immeasurably happy~
Gawd, it was unfairly cute~
And Lavi--just--yeah. Lavi. -squueeeeeee-
8D

And...I disagree with Usagi-chan--I thought it was very funny.
-shot-

I think...my favorite line would have to be the very last one.
Because nothing could possibly be heavier than that thing he called a heart.
It's beautiful, and, well--quite deep, really. It made me smile. A lot.

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