shoot me straight and true; 1/2

[meggers_27]

Title: Shoot Me Straight and True
Rating: PG-13-R-ish.
Disclaimer:  You know the drill, it isn't mine.  Sad but true.
Spoilers:  Takes place in the Back 9 and there are a few spoilers, but not a ton and I'm know this isn't the way the show's going to go.
Pairing: Rachel/Puck
Summary:  Five times Rachel Berry walked away and one time she didn't.
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Comments

[sparkfrost]

Oh, boo, Puck being dumb! :-P This is a really sweet story, I can't wait to read the second part! I love how you wrote both Puck and Rachel's voices, and I'm definitely excited to find out how the story ends. Thanks for sharing!

[meggers_27]

Thanks for the comment.

Puck is well... Puck. I'm pretty sure all high school boys are inherently dumb.

[lapiccolina]

Puck. You're an idiot.

Le sigh.

LOVING IT! w00t! Can't wait for more!

[meggers_27]

Yay, I'm glad you like it, hun!

[madmenfanatic]

oh no! I don't know if my heart is in my throat because Noah cancelled his "standing appts" with Rachel to visit another girl, or if it is because the chapter ended and I didn't expect it. I don't think Noah is an idiot; well, kinda for agreeing to meet a gorgeous girl every afternoon for a week-he should know and care that this would hurt Rachel's feelings. But I think he really is separating from Rachel because of the kiss; he doesn't want to hurt Finn again by dating his ex-girlfriend, and he probably doesn't want to get his feelings hurt when Rachel breaks up with him (Puck) again.

Hey, kudos for having Rachel break up with Finn; pretty quickly and all on her own (no one else's input). She broke up with Finn for Puck's friendship. How awesome is that?

[meggers_27]

Thank you so much.

I think Puck's distancing himself for all of the above. He's deep, yo.

And obvs. I like to potray a more mature Rachel Berry. I think she's pretty self-aware on the show, so I try to do her justice in fic.

[andbless_mybaby]

Oh man. I really like this so far. Puck's being a total jackass, of course. That's so IC for him. Good on Rachel for not letting Finn tell her who she can/cannot hang out with. I love the way you've fleshed out all three main characters here!

Can't wait for the second part!

[meggers_27]

Thank you so much for the comment. I'm pretty sure it's always the best compliment when one of your favorite writers has something to say about something you write. So... thanks!

[reallygoodliars]

I wish this was the way the rest of the season would roll... with Rachel finally, FINALLY getting over Finn and just realizing.

Sheesh.

The spark she sees in him is one she often sees reflected in the mirror. - I really liked that. And I don't think I ever really paid attention to that before.

Great read!

[meggers_27]

Thanks for reading. I think Puck and Rachel are more alike then they both care to admit, so I Iike addressing that dynamic between them.