Since I Finally Have Something to Contribute to This Fantastic Community...

Mar 20, 2011 14:58

... I present you with some strange fic.

Title: Eye of the Storm - Chapter One
Word Count: 2106
Rating: PG
Pairings: MM/RR, Bernard/OC
Summary: It's the night following Tighten's defeat, and Metro City is still recovering. Megamind, Roxanne, and Minion take care of a loose end as a tiny blonde spies from the shadows. What she'll find will knock her ( Read more... )

rating: pg, character: minion, character: roxanne ritchi, fanworks: fanfic, pairing: roxanne/megamind, genre: gen, character: bernard, author: smokeymonster, character: megamind

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megapotterhead March 20 2011, 20:34:33 UTC
XD Bernard is so dramatic! Even worse than Minion....Chloe is going to have a hard time dealing with him, LOL!

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smokeymonster March 20 2011, 20:41:16 UTC
You know it! Thanks for the comment. I can't wait to update this fic. =)

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joanhello March 20 2011, 21:06:46 UTC
I like this. It's well written, has lulz, and the story has so much potential. Looking forward to future chapters.

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smokeymonster March 20 2011, 21:17:50 UTC
Thank you so, so much! I really wasn't sure whether this was worthy of continuation or not, but the positive feedback is very inspiring. =)

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aurawind March 20 2011, 21:55:20 UTC
hahaahaha, your Bernard is a little drama queen XDD this made me laugh, good story :)

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smokeymonster March 20 2011, 22:10:32 UTC
*squee* Thank you!

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aurawind March 20 2011, 22:13:54 UTC
you're welcome ^^
Actually, I'm writing a fic with Bernard and Music Man as main characters, would you like to read it? :)

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smokeymonster March 20 2011, 22:31:52 UTC
It's the Not an Ordinary Random Citizen one, right? I've heard about it, but I'm just not sure how I feel about the pairing.... =(

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4ever_rewritten March 20 2011, 22:12:12 UTC
That last line cracked me up! XD You did a great job on this!

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smokeymonster March 20 2011, 22:21:44 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad it made you laugh. =D

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alwayseasy March 21 2011, 11:34:33 UTC
This was a fantastic beginning to a new chapter, exploring a much ignored aspect of the Megamind film. I don’t think I’ve read any fic that deals with what the HECK happened to Bernard immediately after Minion found him in the laundry machine, and bopped him on the head with the forget me stick. Poor Bernard was bound to be in for a rough couple of days (if not weeks) re-adjusting back to whatever was left of his normal life. So I was so pleased to see that beginning of a fic that’s going to be covering that.

Heeee! And I also love that we’re going to be seeing this played out from a completely neutral perspective. Bernard’s point of view might be fun and interesting, but I think there’s a limit to how much of his inner-thoughts I can take!

Which is why I’m already VERY fond of Chloe. LOL! The poor girl has been through a rough time herself. Newly moved to a city, during a time when the metropolis suffered through massive upheavals, including, but not limited to the unexplained disappearance of her boss, AND the complete destruction ( ... )

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smokeymonster March 21 2011, 15:00:55 UTC
Wow, you're JUST TOO FANTASTIC! I don't think I've ever gotten such a detailed review of anything I've ever written. Thank you so much!

I'm really enjoying writing Bernard from an outside perspective. Not only do I get to develop and expand his personality, but I also get to write other people's reactions to whatever he dishes out. XD

I'm so glad that you're enjoying Chloe. I'm always nervous when creating an OC, knowing how many stereotypical Mary Sues are out there, and how they make people wary of all OCs, even the good ones. If there was a character in the present Megamind universe whom I felt I could've use for the purposes of my fic, I would've used him or her. However, none of them just seemed to fit what I was looking for, so I decided to create my own. I just hope I did a good job ( ... )

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