Well, LJ spontaniously changed the font and color of a bit of this story in the middle... I have *just* found the problem and it should be fixed. Hopefully
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I am *definitely* enjoying this series. :-D I can hardly wait to read about Megamind's reaction at finding himself suddenly in Roxanne's body in the middle of a TV interview!
Oooh! Playful brainbots! Always welcome. And then the shock of the huge population. And the hair-smoothing. I was expecting her to try something like that. Excellent character interactions, and I like Roxanne's teasing. It lets her interact while pretending she's not forming a connection to her perpetual kidnapper. Liked the conversation with Minion. (Yay for nosy reporter skills
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They thought Daddy was wanting to play! I chose to set the story shortly after he started using the brainbots around Roxanne so she would be nervous around them. They are pretty vicious looking. And I just bet that wild hair has been bothering her since they rescued her from prison.
And ratings! It's all about the ratings!
I'll get to fixing those issues you spotted. Good eye! and thanks for reading/reviewing!
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And I made myself laugh at his reactions. He's so fun to freak out. Mwahahaha!
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And ratings! It's all about the ratings!
I'll get to fixing those issues you spotted. Good eye! and thanks for reading/reviewing!
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