This is off to a good start! I think you should make the crown of his head rounder and his head all together wider though :) Can't wait to see more of this!
That wasn't easy. I drew it as well to see where the difficulties are. And though you already focussed on the facial expression more than to accurate re-draw it, the body is important, too - in your picture he stands not right. A lot of impression comes from him leaning against the ball, but in yours it seems more like he just stands next to it.
Yuui brings up a good yet subtle point. You want his center of gravity between his body and the ball, (hence him leaning). Yours is very subtly more under him than beside him. The way his body curves a bit more away from the ball, and how his left hip (our right) is jutting out a bit more.
It's a great start. I especially love the hands, and the one on his hip looks amazing already, his arm is drawn perfectly. I like how the shading is done so far, too.
I agree, a bit more work on the body language. He says so much with so little, and his body is just as wonderfully expressive as his face.
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trying something new with how I'm going to colour this in.
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I drew it as well to see where the difficulties are. And though you already focussed on the facial expression more than to accurate re-draw it, the body is important, too - in your picture he stands not right. A lot of impression comes from him leaning against the ball, but in yours it seems more like he just stands next to it.
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I really look foward to seeing this finished.
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I agree, a bit more work on the body language. He says so much with so little, and his body is just as wonderfully expressive as his face.
Can't wait to see the end result :)
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thanks working on a group pic of my own characters as well as this.
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