When You Smile Chapter 2

Apr 22, 2012 23:56

Fandom : The Manchurian Candidate
Pairing : Raymond/Eleanor
Rating : PG-13 for this chapter, it will most likely go up later ;)
Warning : This story contains incest. If that freaks you out, turn away now. Read at your own risk.
Disclaimer : None of these characters belong to me, just the plotline sadly :(

Raymond didn't know how to get the moment back. )

raymond shaw, meryl streep, the manchurian candidate, eleanor shaw

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katherinepend April 23 2012, 04:20:13 UTC
Okay, I Don't Even Know Where The Hell To Start With My Comment. Actually, Yes I Do!

PERFECTION

PERFECTION

FLAWLESS

MORE PERFECTION

AND I'M DEAD OVER HERE <3333

Seriously, Ugh <333 This Update Was SO Worth The Wait!All The Sexual Tension Between Them In This Chapter Is Gonna Make Their "All The Way" That Much Hotter <3333

You Write These Characters Like You Own Them! Seriously, I Can Picture Them Doing Each And Every Thing You've Written Them Doing! I'm Mind Blown At How Well You Write Them.

Now I'll Go Read It A Million More Times While I Wait On Baited Breath/Pins And Needles For Chapter 3 <33333

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meg22591 April 23 2012, 04:34:30 UTC
You KILL me. I just get done writing and I'm fairly happy with my chapter, but knowing its no where near as great as some other writers I know and then I get your comment. And it's so amazing that I almost don't believe you. Almost. Haha.

I'm gonna need to come up with some way to keep writing this. Why do they have to be politicians? It's so hard to write a full story when their careers are involved and I never know what the hell I'm talking about!

As far as the characters go...I could never wish to write them as well as you say. I merely go off of Meryl and Liev. They're the ones who made me write what I write. There's an idea, there. Meryl and Liev. ;) Holy crap. No, Megan, no. You have too many stories going as it is.

You see what you do now? You make me talk to myself lol Just......Thank you thank you thank you thank you! For reading my fics and loving them :)

Meg

ps. please honor me with more of your writing soon, or at least your ideas :)

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katherinepend April 23 2012, 04:45:08 UTC
LOL! Believe Me XD Believe Me Believe Me Believe Me! If I Thought Your Writing Was Bad I'd Say So....Or I'd Leave A Little Bland Comment Like, "This is Great". It's Seriously Amazing <33333 Never Doubt Your Writing Skills ( ... )

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meg22591 April 23 2012, 05:03:36 UTC
I am about to convince you that you could probably indeed write RPF and that I would definitely read it. :D I would love to write them, but don't you just hate that even though it's fulfilling to write it takes the surprise out of it? That's the one thing I don't like about it. Because everyone would much rather read, but writing is so much harder ( ... )

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heymovie1 June 15 2014, 06:28:05 UTC
You simply must continue this! It is off to a brilliant start!

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meg22591 June 15 2014, 11:08:35 UTC
I can try lol not many people ship this pairing (for
obvious reasons) but if you dm me I can send u something more :)

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