Can You See Me? -- 1/?

[meetmyheartbeat]

Title: Can You See Me? 1/?
Author: meetmyheartbeat
Rating: PG13 as of right now. 
Length: 1,233
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Rachel Cocoran-Berry has a power. It manifests according to feelings. 
A/N: I was ~roaming tumblr the other day and I found this: LINK~ and I was inspired. I technically haven't written since June of 2010, so this might not be my best

Comments

[meetmyheartbeat]

Awe! Thank you<3 :)

[motylik]

I totally didn't think it was possible for me to hate Shelby even more than I did. Huh. Guess I was wrong. Can't wait for you to continue! Poor Rachel. :)

[meetmyheartbeat]

o: Hating Shelby even more? Impossible~
Thank you!! <3

[valvox]

Shelby always makes me so sad. I cried when she 'realised' that she didn't want Rachel because she wasn't a baby anymore. I mean, seriously. If you WANT it to work, it WILL work, you just have to try. That woman. Breaks my heart to see Rachel like that. Shelby better have a damn good reason for abandoning Rachel now.
Looking forward to reading more, it looks quite interesting. I hope Quinn isn't bitchy the whole of the fic. :/
Thanks for an intriguing chapter, you have me hooked :) xx

[meetmyheartbeat]

Awe. You're sweet~ :)
No, Quinn won't be a bitch the entire fic, cause that really would suck to write. D:
Thank you! <3

[thatissodawn]

Great start.

"she could see her hands anymore, and as she realized this, she watched as her feet disappeared too, her clothes going with her."

-- just spotted a small mistake! "couldn't" :]

[meetmyheartbeat]

O:
Thank youuu!
I hate little mistake like that. haha. My bad~

[bamf_gleek]

Amazing start so far. Truly captured Rachel's feelings of abandonment as a child. Poor thing.. :( Please continue and update soon.