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aledstrange March 19 2009, 20:18:03 UTC
WWWWOOOOWWWW!!!
Amazing work with the pictures, specially the escape scene!!
It's soooo well done!!! *thumbs up*
And the part with Circe and the baby, ewwwww freaky!!! I got chills!!

Can't wait to see what happens now after Olive found Nervous!
will it be better .... or worse!??? :o

Great update!!! ;)

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meetme2theriver March 20 2009, 16:32:36 UTC
Hee, I'm glad you enjoyed the escape scene. :D I admit I was showing off there a bit, I was just taking so many pictures. :p Shiftable OMSP + military career reward + sim blender to change Bella's outfit did the trick. It was a lot of fun!

Circe is eeevil. I'm glad I could make it creepy enough.

Hmm... Olive and Nervous... Well, it would be hard to make things worse for Nervous than they were at the Beakers'... :) Plus, she does know who he is...

Thank you for commenting!

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aledstrange March 21 2009, 15:57:14 UTC
lol show off!! XD
but well deserved! ;)

Think I can imagine how complicated it was, and the position is just right on each screen, too. That requires a lot of work, for sure.

Now, Olive ... ermm.. well, she knows who he is, but also has 4 dead husbands on the yard!! :o (well, 3 dead husbands and a boyfriend, or something like it XD)

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meetme2theriver March 21 2009, 23:15:51 UTC
It was a bit of work, yeah, especially since stupid Bella kept FALLING OFF the climbing wall and then I'd have to start all over again. :p But those shiftable OMSPs were just perfect for this scene, I dunno how I would have done it otherwise!

Heehee, yes, Olive does have a bunch of dead husbands... and a whole lot of other completely random victims, too. However, I do think she feels differently about her son... I mean, he is the offspring of her one true love - Death - after all. ;) Well, we'll see, we'll see...

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gavvywolfkidd March 19 2009, 20:43:13 UTC
Here's an idea: get Selena taken away from the Beaker's by the social worker- they really don't deerve a kid after all they've put Bella and Nervous through!

Great chapter anyway.

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meetme2theriver March 20 2009, 16:33:54 UTC
Selene taken away? It would serve them right... but with Loki and Circe as her parents, maybe evil insanity is just in her genes? :)

Thanks for reading!

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showercapfrog March 19 2009, 23:40:28 UTC
The escape scene pics were fantastic.

And nooo...Bella, you can't be left alone! I hope Nervous gets away from his mother enough to rescue Bella and her daughter.

Circe scares the crap out of me, by the way. I shiver when I see her in pictures. Good job.

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meetme2theriver March 20 2009, 16:36:41 UTC
Thank you!

Let's hope that Nervous is able to do something... otherwise things are looking pretty bad for Bella and Elizabeth now.

Circe scares me as well, and I'm glad I can get her creepiness across well enough to scare my readers, too. Loki isn't nearly as scary as her, I think. He's more tie-lady-to-train-tracks-while-cackling-madly kind of evil, while Circe is just pure, cold evil.

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muslemura March 20 2009, 09:53:16 UTC
Poor Bella...poor Elizabeth :( Have a feeling Olive won't like what the Beakers have done to her son though. I'm hoping they get what they deserve *evil grin*

Like others have said, the escape scene was wonderfully executed - having fun with the new OMSP-something-or-other? :)

And yay! Cute green babies, Buck/Jill kisses and JRO off to Uni! Looking forward to the next chapter :D

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meetme2theriver March 20 2009, 16:39:18 UTC
Think Olive will disapprove of the Beakers' treatment of Nervous, eh? Yes... that seems very likely. :)

I did indeed use the new shiftable OMSPs for the climbing scene. They are excellent, by the way. I'm sure I'll find them useful for many things. :D

I like tossing in little pictures and hints about what's going on around the main plot. :) The little Smith twins are too cute not to share.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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sidonzo March 20 2009, 19:13:14 UTC
I loved this! Great writing! XD

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meetme2theriver March 21 2009, 07:38:18 UTC
Thank you! :)

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