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showercapfrog February 5 2009, 23:09:05 UTC
I love the parallel of the births.

At least one of them will be happy and able to spend time with their child...

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meetme2theriver February 6 2009, 16:53:08 UTC
I spent quite some time trying to figure out how to organise this chapter. It was hard to get everything in order in my head for this one. But I was happy with the parallel layout, I think it worked pretty well. :)

Vidcund will probably be better at the parenting thing than he thinks.

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aledstrange February 5 2009, 23:25:58 UTC
ohhhh nooooooo!!!! Poor baby!!
On Loki's hands!?? That's no good!!
The last shot makes me shiver! :(

Lots of cute green babies too, calls my attention Bella's seem to be the only one without alien eyes! :P
And Jenny's Twins!! Cute!! <3 I need to give them twins on my story too, originally they had boy/girl both blond! Not sure if I'll be that lucky again! lol (not for having a special predilection, at the contrary! I rather if the Smiths have redhairs, but all children with Jenny's hair was cute on the story)

Good thing Lazlo broke up with Crystal! LOL!! even i rather Erin over her for Laz! LOL!!

Great update!! :D

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meetme2theriver February 6 2009, 17:02:01 UTC
Glad I could get the eerieness across... Loki and Circe + baby is not a good combination.

Hehe, well, both Vidcund and Jenny have recessive eye genes, while alien is dominant, so. I had to reroll Pascal's baby a few times to get what I wanted, though (girl, alien eyes, nose). For Vidcund and Jenny I went with the first they got. For Bella I wanted a girl, and she just so happened to get blue eyes. :) Those are from the recessive genes I gave Bella, I think her brother Michael Bachelor has dark blue eyes.

Anyway, yeah, twins just seems right for Jenny & PT9! Girl and boy twins, especially. :) I love red hair on aliens, it's my favourite I think, and all of Jenny + PT9's kids that I've had born seems to get red hair! Blond is cool too, though.

Haha, well, Lazlo hates Crystal (EVERYONE hates Crystal), negative chemistry with her, so I figured I'd find Lazlo someone he liked better. Erin seems to fit with him...

Thanks for reading :)

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ext_157511 February 5 2009, 23:51:28 UTC
What a perfect update! And I loved how you added that milk carton detail that prompted Bella's memory! That was my favorite part of the update - can't wait for your next installment! I'm such a fan.

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meetme2theriver February 6 2009, 19:10:02 UTC
Thank you! :D That milk carton picture has always begged me to use it SOMEHOW, finally I got a chance to.

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cindyanne1 February 6 2009, 01:02:03 UTC
Oh I loved this update! Bella getting all maternal and her flashbacks were beautifully done!

Your alien babies are all so adorable! And Erin and Lazlo = perfect!!! I often pair them up myself. One of the most fun couples I've ever played!

I do feel sorry for Bella. :(

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meetme2theriver February 6 2009, 19:13:01 UTC
Thank you! :)

Alien babies are great, aren't they? :D I need to make myself a multiple PT hack variety again... y'know, for future purposes.

Erin and Lazlo are great. Actually, when I first tried to get them together, they had negative chemistry, despite me matching their secondary aspirations (popularity for him, knowledge for her) and their turn ons/offs. I was really disappointed! But then as they flirted and talked a bit, it suddenly went up to two bolts! Weird. But they're quite in love now. :D

I feel kinda sorry for Bella too, but hardships makes a good story, doesn't it? ;)

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akatonbo February 6 2009, 03:39:51 UTC
Yay Lazlo and Erin! That's who I hook him up with too, especially what with the common interests. I'm looking forward to future updates. :)

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meetme2theriver February 6 2009, 22:08:34 UTC
Hee, yeah, they are cute together, aren't they? :) I like fiddling with the secondary story characters, I can do more as I like with them. :p

Next update is hopefully not too far away!

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