Fic: Nothing Else (I Can Say) (House/Cuddy)

Oct 16, 2009 13:41



I wrote some smut, y'all.  Kinda.

Title:  Nothing Else (I Can Say)
Character/s:  Lisa Cuddy, Greg House, Lucas (boo)
Warning:  NC-17, I think. I suck at ratings. Hence: SMUT ALERT. Poetic, romantic smut, but smut nonetheless.
Spoilers:  CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR SPOILERS.
Word Count:  2000
Disclaimer:  I don’t own anything, except 11 different mp3 ( Read more... )

huddy, character: lisa cuddy, character: greg house, fic, house, smut, queen gaga

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mlo1114 October 16 2009, 04:07:10 UTC
OMG, you kill me ♥♥♥!!
(and I know I'm missing another piece from you but ahh pathology I need to read that first...)

I really really loved Cuddy's detachment from Lucas... that was beautifully written, perfect perfect Cuddy and I guess one roots for the dark side, it's more appealing and the Don part perfect, really magnificent adaptation (I don't have really the appropriate words!) I just liked it a lot plus "how they got to the bed..." subtle so subtle...

For a reason I liked a lot the lace/silk reference... maybe I have issues and the end just had it. I long for that! (H&C just being happy, even if just for a moment but I guess that a moment makes the difference and then they can work from it!)

AMAZING JOB BB, I SO ♥ U!!

mlo

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 04:24:27 UTC
Heehee!! I love killing you with Huddy ( ... )

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missbuterfly October 16 2009, 04:07:25 UTC
*squeeee*

What a beautiful work bb. I loved so much.

Bye bye Lucas. lol. But I still like Lucas, he just need to stay out of the huddy way.

oh honey, your smut was so sweet.. so lovely.. so kind..
I think you should right the huddy sex scene and sent to Shore.
You write so well.

bright eyes find hers in the looming dark.
I loved this part. I really can imagine this scene on my head. ♥

There is nothing else, in the whole world.
Don is right. House is the one to Cuddy and she is to him.
And nothing in the world will disturb this thing between them.

And to you know, I read the hole fic listening Lady Gaga. Love it.

(♥)

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 04:16:00 UTC
Yay! I'm so happy you liked it! It's not really smutty, but I did my best!

Yep, bye bye Lucas!! *waves* LOL

LMAO I would, but Shore would sue the pants right off of me, I'm sure! I just hope we will get a sex scene, preferably soon... I don't care who writes it, just give it to me!! ;)

House's eyes (well, HL's eyes) are so amazing, that blue really shines in the dark. I can picture it too!!!

I really, really liked Don! He was a cool guy, and he was smart enough to see how she feels about House after one date. Lucas, on the other hand, is obviously not so smart...

I read the hole fic listening Lady Gaga
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was playing the Taratata songs on repeat while I was writing, they're so incredibly brilliant! When she sings in French on 'Pokerface'... wow. I love her even more (and that is difficult, because I love her so much already)

♥ ♥ ♥

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missbuterfly October 16 2009, 04:36:08 UTC
lol. Not really smutt. For me was a smut, I like this type of smut, It´s sweet.. romantic.. ♥ writing little things and let our minds traveling in the story.

I want the huddy sex too.. and soon.. in this season.
I can´t wait more.. we are waiting for 6 years.. I´m tired of wait.. I want action.

Oh those eyes! I´m in love for Hugh´s eyes.

Yep. Don could figure out everything in one night. But I have sure that Lucas knows too. I´m still believing that the hole Lucas thing will bring huddy closer. *crosses fingers*

I downloaded the music. I love it this verson. One the things that I love most in gaga is that every performance of her is diferent and is amazing. Like you, I love her everyday more.

(♥)

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 04:43:17 UTC
I prefer this type of smut too, tbh. And House and Cuddy need a little bit of romance, not just dirty stuff!!! ;)

We HAVE been waiting for six years! Sometimes I forget this fact, but you're right! We've been waiting so long..... :( We definitely need action!

HL's eyes AND Lisa's eyes are both incredible! So beautiful and watchable :)

You're right, Lucas does know, but I think he's probably in denial. It's mean, but I kinda hope he is REALLY in love with Cuddy; she deserves to have someone be heartbroken over her, if you get what I mean? She's the only character who has not had a love story/interest, and that's silly, because if she were real she would have a million people in love with her! (Including me, lol)

Oh, good, I'm glad you snagged the music! Do you have the other songs too in mp3? I can upload them for you if you need; I always rip the music from every new video that goes up on lgfans. Just let me know, and I can put them up for you ♥

ILY too, more and more with every day and every squeeing conversation we have!!

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lesaubergines October 16 2009, 04:57:39 UTC
Beautifully written!

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 05:01:00 UTC
Thanks so much!

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wanderlonely October 16 2009, 05:28:13 UTC
Beautiful beautiful writing. ♥ ♥ ♥

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 05:33:11 UTC
Thank you! I really appreciate your reading and commenting!

Not to mention I love to see your icon: LE and pink is such a great combination! ;D

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julessunshine82 October 16 2009, 06:12:55 UTC
Okay, these lines killed me:

"He looks happy, happier than she has seen him in years, perhaps, and when he kisses her, and murmurs three tiny, bird-fragile words, right into her mouth, she knows - she understands, finally - that Don was right.

There is nothing else, in the whole world."

"Bird-fragile" might be my new favorite adjective.

And I loved the whole "normal person" repetition. Oh, that was good, and how you're bringing in her crazy father, which sort of leaks into her character as well and explains SO much.

Don definitely hit the nail on the head.

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meelsie_love78 October 16 2009, 06:43:44 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it! ♥

I HAD to have House say 'I love you', but I couldn't actually write him saying it; too cheesy. I'm pleased you enjoyed their little happy ending!

And yeah, bird-fragile is one of my completely made-up images, lol. I use it a lot!

Oh, I'm so happy you liked the 'normal person' stuff! This is something I feel is SO central to Cuddy's character; that she is profoundly critical of herself, and is constantly comparing herself (and ruling herself a failure) to some ridiculous standard of 'normal' that she has made up in her mind. And her father and his issues do not help this at all. I'll have to get cracking on my fic idea in which Cuddy's sister is introduced; I plan to put a lot more backstory re Cuddy Snr in that piece. He's a VERY intriguing character, and Cuddy is so terribly damaged by her quasi-relationship with him...

I loved Don. He was so, so, so great. He got it, he got her, in one date. I hope he found a really nice girlfriend, and is very happy, lol!

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