I read this feeling a premonition that going through door was a metaphor for death. Am not sure it wasn't at the time but the crisis passed.
Love the name Aelfdene and it's meaning. That premonition turned out perhaps being a foretelling. Perhaps he will go through that door because it would be an easy way to travel for visiting Aelfdene's family or even where Dean and Mike might live together. They want to visit Mike's parents if so.
oooooo. Maybe there'd be the possibility of grandkids for Mike's parents 'cause who knows what possibilities Elfen culture has for same sex pairs.
Love this so much. Your writing skills are in the category of matured to a publishable state.
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Love the name Aelfdene and it's meaning.
That premonition turned out perhaps being a foretelling.
Perhaps he will go through that door because it would be an easy way to travel for visiting Aelfdene's family or even where Dean and Mike might live together. They want to visit Mike's parents if so.
oooooo. Maybe there'd be the possibility of grandkids for Mike's parents 'cause who knows what possibilities Elfen culture has for same sex pairs.
Love this so much. Your writing skills are in the category of matured to a publishable state.
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Awwww do kind, I'll forgive you the plunnies lol
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