[Naruto drabble]Blood stained shell

Oct 06, 2007 17:20

Spoilers for recent manga chapters implicit.

Blood stained shell )

naruto, fic

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kireiko October 6 2007, 16:04:40 UTC
This was beautifully written. I love the wording and your choice of style. Both thought-provoking yet abrupt and cool - you've captured Itachi's seemingly deceptive detachment and Madara's loftiness with a side of covetuous greed prettily. Very, very nicely written!

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maxxim_huzzah October 7 2007, 11:07:15 UTC
I definitely agree--you caught Itachi's heightened self-control as he reported back to Madara. It has that restraint and deception that Itachi has. :D

Itachi's gaze remains fixed on the clouds that cry so copiously when he cannot. "He wasn't worth killing." One of my favorite lines in the fic!

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anonymous January 5 2008, 11:57:27 UTC
whats happening with demons among us

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lunamazes January 25 2008, 21:24:28 UTC
Birthday is here, be happy!!

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