It’s one thing to know, on an intellectual level, that he’s losing weight. It’s another thing entirely to feel it viscerally, to know that when he bends over, he can touch his toes. Or that he can do push-ups and pull-ups and actually do them right, without cheating. Or that he’s got a boyfriend, sort of, and that his boyfriend is hotter than lava. When Jared grabs his hand and tugs him out into the sunshine, Jensen truly believes it.
I just wanted to leave a little drive by comment before I keep reading to tell you that this part made me cry. A couple times. Sad and happy and self-indulgent in different times. I'm really loving this story. Thank you for writing it. ♥
Ok, I didn't comment the previos part, but I couldn't resist to comment this one.
You see, you write this, and I got so, shocked, touched by it:
“Years,” he says to Jared, shaking his head as they start to stretch in front of the mirrors. “Fucking years, like, fifteen years, I’ve been such a mess. I mean, I was a mess! Afraid of everything. Weak. Invisible. Hopeless. And then I get here, and in three months, I’ve lost a hundred pounds.” He opens his eyes wide and looks at Jared. “How does that happen?”
I swear I was about to cry when I read that. You're so awesome, and this story is the proof of that!!
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It’s one thing to know, on an intellectual level, that he’s losing weight. It’s another thing entirely to feel it viscerally, to know that when he bends over, he can touch his toes. Or that he can do push-ups and pull-ups and actually do them right, without cheating. Or that he’s got a boyfriend, sort of, and that his boyfriend is hotter than lava. When Jared grabs his hand and tugs him out into the sunshine, Jensen truly believes it.
Lovely chapter.
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You see, you write this, and I got so, shocked, touched by it:
“Years,” he says to Jared, shaking his head as they start to stretch in front of the mirrors. “Fucking years, like, fifteen years, I’ve been such a mess. I mean, I was a mess! Afraid of everything. Weak. Invisible. Hopeless. And then I get here, and in three months, I’ve lost a hundred pounds.” He opens his eyes wide and looks at Jared. “How does that happen?”
I swear I was about to cry when I read that. You're so awesome, and this story is the proof of that!!
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
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‘Sexual Chocolate’? Isn’t that the wrestler Mark Henry? LOL
Awwwww! They’re soooo cuuuttteeeeeee! I’ve got this big, sappy grin on my face right now. *G*
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