mmmmm. This was really good. I liked the back & forth between Susan's journal & Harry and Draco. I like how everyone accepts their relationship, but doesn't like it, including the boys themselves.
There are just too many parts that I loved to quote them back at you. It has a home in my memories & it will be recced.
I'm very glad you liked it. They do like their relationship, and Draco's quite afraid of losing it, or worse, of letting himself make compromises in order to keep it. They just don't remember that all the time ;)
What I've been trying was precisely that, to keep it as realistic as possible! The change in POV was a compromise - I needed a "biased" voice, so to speak, and that was Susan, but the focus wasn't meant to be on her - and that's way the PoV changes like this. Thanks for reading.
Umm, I did just review at FA but I couldn't help it: This is one brilliant fic. Exceptionally done. The flow of narrative always intriguing and kept me pleasantly curious. The reality of it all was the best, it was raw and flawed and just perfect.
The reality of it all was the best, it was raw and flawed and just perfect.
I tried my best to portray how Harry and Draco's relationship would work, taking HBP into account - and it's no way that it would be sunshine and butterflies, it never is like that. It means a lot to me that you find my take on their relationship valid and thank you for the inspiring words - both here and on the FA!
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I like how everyone accepts their relationship, but doesn't like it, including the boys themselves.
There are just too many parts that I loved to quote them back at you.
It has a home in my memories & it will be recced.
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*is breathless with praise*
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I tried my best to portray how Harry and Draco's relationship would work, taking HBP into account - and it's no way that it would be sunshine and butterflies, it never is like that. It means a lot to me that you find my take on their relationship valid and thank you for the inspiring words - both here and on the FA!
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