Comments | mecomptane: [Fanfic][KHR!][27,Aria,Uni,D,59] Beautiful Ones

mecomptane

[Fanfic][KHR!][27,Aria,Uni,D,59] Beautiful Ones

Feb 16, 2011 12:32

My goodness, my fail at replying to comments is steadily getting worse. I shall be getting around to it... this evening. After class. Midterms and tutoring people eat my life. (Thesis? What thesis ( Read more... )

khr!aria, khr!dino, vongola, khr!goku, fanfiction, khr!uni, reborn!, khr!, khr!tuna

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reidluver February 17 2011, 01:15:45 UTC

Whoa--beautiful! :) And I'm quite happy that there will be more. I have to admit that I skimmed the info and just went to the fic. ^^; I'm a bit impatient sometimes

I really loved the depth of which you went into their relationships. I loved the interaction with Dino and Tsuna--so what would happen! And go Uni for telling off that creepy don. XD Aria was really great as well, and I laughed a lot with her around. Then the discussion with Gokudera had me laughing so much--then when he said good-bye I was all "D'aaawww!!"

I also really loved the way you had all the don give Uni feathers. :) She probably looked absolutely beautiful in all of those. And the way you characterized her---this whole fic was awesome!

*eagerly waits for more*

mecomptane February 24 2011, 03:58:37 UTC

B'aw, thanks! I tend to read titles, who the fic is about, and then skip the rest. But for coherency's sake, everything else goes up, too.

Ahahaha, this was, honestly, mostly stream-of-consciousness at first? So I'm glad that it's in-depth and entertaining! DINOOOO. Uni is an amazingly adorable little one, but I swear if Aria was still alive and brought her into the mafia before she died, Uni would be a sweet adorable girl who can kick. Ass. Even more so if Reborn was involved in her upbringing. XD

Aria always struck me as an interesting character, being basically the only female that Amano hasn't made into The Chick or Faux Action Girl. She was strong enough to lead an entire family against Byakuran, to the point where Giglio Nero only fell because Aria was dead, Genkishi a traitor and Uni... I presume not sure how else to save everyone besides letting herself get mindraped. Still. Aria was a strong woman, and only fell because of an illness. Not even killed--she was sick, probably with Anti-Tresnisette radiation. So. Interesting ( ... )