If At First You Don't Succeed, for Undead Big Bang, H/C Bingo and Who Contest

[meatball42]

Title: If At First You Don’t Succeed
Fandoms: Torchwood and Doctor Who
Rating: PG
Characters/pairings: Jack/Ianto, the Doctor
Warnings (including spoilers): Spoilers for CoE, those thirty seconds at the end of End of Days.
Wordcount: 6,436 words
Author's Note: The gorgeous art in this fic (more of which is visible at the ART MASTERPOST) was

Comments

[pecos]

That's like a face-slap!

[unfeathered]

An intriguing opening - I look forward to more! :-)

[black59]

argh! => "" I know, "he Said, and suddenly he Looked more like a skeleton than a man." Promise me you will not send him, "he begged.

"I will not," Jack repeated. "I'll keep him with me." "

but that's how he dies!!!!!

good start!