Halfway (Chapter 6)

[meatarashii]

 

Comments

[hana_kiree]

Omomomomo..what a pleasant surpriseee~~~ I'm saving this later on when I come back ^^

[meatarashii]

Wow, that was quick! XD

[yozora_yume]

this is just so heart warming. you're a great writer and hey i waited for this fic!^^ and glad i did.:))

[meatarashii]

Thanks for waiting for it, then! 8D

I'm glad you liked it. :D

[underthepines]

Aw, this was sweet! I just read through the whole thing, and you did a great job of characterizing Bong Goon and Jae Joon. They were very much like their characters in their respective programs^^

Just one mild structural criticism... In many sentences, you tended to repeat the same word, for example describing them each separately as distracted. It's not a big deal, but eliminating that as much as possible will help make your writing sound even better^^;; (and I think it definitely did improve throughout the story!)

[meatarashii]

Glad you liked the fic then!

Yea, I tend to do that, but I've been working on improving that. :) This is actually relatively old, and it also came from a VERY LONG oneshot, so it was a bit of work getting it the way it is...so I guess in in extending it I accidentally repeated words.

Thanks for commenting!

[zoevo]

cant believe I nearly missed this chapter.
wonderful ending, so simple but full of emotions. Totally love it.
Thanks so much for sharing this fic.

[meatarashii]

People post fast, don't they? XD

I'm glad you love it! I hope I can get the epilogue up sooner than it took me to post this to give the whole thing more closure. :D

Glad to share, my friend. :)

[anael777]

you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it ^^ they are together ^^
thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter please don;t keep us waiting!! ^^

[meatarashii]

Finally, right? XD Glad you love it. :)

You're very welcome! I'll try to upload the epilogue soon :)