sayid, claire

[meanwhile_84]

sayid, claire (sorta…)
PG
appx 300 words
post-3.02 ("The Glass Ballerina")
i don't know if this one makes sense...(?)

Comments

[eponine119]

He was always resigned to war when it was men fighting men.

This entire idea is an interesting concept. I like the way you approached it.

[meanwhile_84]

Well, I'm glad it makes some sense. :) Really, when I re-read it, I didn't know if it did.

Thanks for the feedback. ♥

[gottalovev]

How do you strike that balance, where you know how to protect without making things worse, where you let yourself fight without bringing destruction to the people around you?

very interesting. and that applies to so many personal relationships (parenting, especially) it's universal.

and rationalizing war... that's the only way a soldier can be, IMHO. good job

[meanwhile_84]

Thanks so much for the feedback here. Makes my story feel smarter than I think it was. :)