Seen (Danielle, PG)

Dec 04, 2008 22:44

Title: Seen
Character: Danielle
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Note: Thanks to bachlava for the sage advice and the pep talk. :)

She doesn't see the sky very much )

danielle

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bachlava December 5 2008, 04:47:58 UTC
See, I told you you'd be able to get Danielle! This is a lovely glimpse inside her mind during the sort of interval period - a part of her wants to give and receive help, but she no longer really remembers how to do or even acknowledge that in any normal way, and the possibilities that are and aren't occurring to her aren't what we'd expect. But wow - way to pack it all in to 300 words! You are awesome.

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meanwhile_84 December 5 2008, 05:05:35 UTC
Honestly, if this makes sense at all it's because just as I sat down to try and write this, with vague things swirling in my brain, I got your reply to my comment from a few days ago. It really helped, as did your initial prompts. You're seriously too kind. ♥

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siluria December 6 2008, 19:50:40 UTC
You've done a really wonderful job bringing a inside look to characters I don't normally pay much attention to. I really like this insight to Danielle.

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meanwhile_84 December 16 2008, 06:15:12 UTC
Thanks! :D

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