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hurley, sayid

Jan 18, 2007 17:00

hurley, sayid
PG
appx 350 words
spoilers for early season three

( Hurley lies awake, unable to sleep after leaving them behind like that... )

sayid, hurley

Comments 4

eponine119 January 19 2007, 02:34:45 UTC

Aw, poor Hurley! I like the kind of back and forth with this -- the strong die; the strong find ways to make things happen.

meanwhile_84 January 21 2007, 20:21:17 UTC

It wasn't too rambly? Good. :) Thanks.

gottalovev January 19 2007, 14:21:42 UTC

I love how this flows... we are totally in his head following his train of thoughts and that's awesome.

putting libby between parenthesis... on a line of her own... ow. poor Hurley.

meanwhile_84 January 21 2007, 20:22:35 UTC

It flows? Really? I was kinda worried it was too random...

Thanks. :)