App post-- but not for me?!
I have a ton of people I have offered to beta for, and to help keep my sanity (between 22 hours of school, I really don't know how I have any sanity left. AH. HAH. Haaah.) I'm going to make a post for you to abuse here, if you so like! My email is still fine, but just in case
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I mean, why else would she do it? Because she's also a voyeuristic fangirl with a camera ready to snap pictures in case you get molested? Naaaah, never! [This is awkward! I think putting the never in front would be better phrased and have more of an impact. 'Certainly not because she's also a voyeuristic fangirl with a camera.. stuff...! That'd be unbecoming, honestly!]
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First notes! You already have an amazing length going here, so trimming down should be absolutely no problem, which is a plus. There's nothing like trying to force yourself to write more, after all! And I think I know the areas I'd suggest snipping, too, since there's a few areas where cohesion is weak, which hurts the jokes. I'll try to point them out as best as I can!
The next comment, since it actually contains your app, I'm gonna screen, okay? I. am sorry kdfsf I have never done comment beta-ing before. ;;
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