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Betrayal

Jan 25, 2013 11:22

Title: Betrayal
Author: md123
Rating: PG
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Word Count: 638
Spoilers: "Florida", "Jackie Jorp Jomp," "Apollo,Apollo"
Summary: "It was quite a bomb that Jack had so casually dropped."

As the Florida coastline receded below her, Liz stared into the airplane window and tried to process the previous evening. It was quite a bomb that Jack had so ( Read more... )

Comments 9

demilybones January 25 2013, 19:49:56 UTC

Bravo! An oasis in a desert of 30-Rock-is-ending feelings. :(

md123 January 26 2013, 00:39:27 UTC

Yes, this episode totally opened the fic floodgates, at least for me.

demilybones January 26 2013, 01:58:54 UTC

I feel ya. I was motivated to finish my multi-chaptered fic, anyways. I haven't even updated since August, but I completed it today!

parisgal3 January 25 2013, 22:30:55 UTC

Oh, so nice to read a conversation between them about the Jenna revelation. I imagine if the fic-writing fandom was as prolific as it once was, there would be a ton of fics sprung off of that one sentence.

Loved it!

md123 January 26 2013, 00:42:01 UTC

If you back three or four years there are quite a few fics (michellek, I think?) that work out the Jack-dates-Jenna-and-drives-Liz crazy scenario.

singsongrandom January 27 2013, 20:04:37 UTC

You write Jack & Liz perfectly. The last few lines in this were simultaneously sweet and heartbreaking! Ah, I wish this ship had sailed, but reading your fics make it feel canon, at least for me. :)

md123 January 28 2013, 14:25:02 UTC

Thanks. Those are nice compliments.

zodiac_sign December 12 2013, 14:36:14 UTC

Lovely and very true to the show!

Well done!