Is Harry smoking? He needs a cigarette in his mouth for this scene. And to have a glass of something strong and cheap on the table. Yep. Very film noir.
(gasp!) You... you... you are going to turn in Snape to Harry??? (faints) Sequel, sequel!! Use the blonde to double-cross Harry! Give the exploding pen to Snape! Don't let Harry tear Snape apart!
Playing catch-up, and OMG I love you for that Chandleresque first line! Well, the whole thing, really, but especially that first line, which reminds me of when I first read Chandler and kept quoting similes to my boyfriend.
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Very cool.
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xxx
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Brilliant - I loved the feeling-voice-in-hip-pocket above all else ;).
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Grand !
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Wonderful job. Thanks!
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Lovely, fun drabble!
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