Cat's Birthday HP Drabblethon III

Apr 16, 2006 00:00

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ehnel April 16 2006, 09:40:44 UTC
Recipient: agnes_bean
Prompt: “What you hope is beneath your skin/is beneath your skin” (Quote from Frank O'Hara (poet))
Word count: 269
Rating: PG-13 maybe? For being kinda icksquick?He was possessed by the longing to do it. He ran his hand over his arm, then curled it until the nails pressed lightly into the skin, a faint pressure with no pain. He dug them in, so lightly, until little red crescents stained the whiteness, and he stared, mesmerised ( ... )

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ziasudra_fic April 16 2006, 14:20:01 UTC
ooh, nice. You captured the desperation so well, the desire to be different, to have new skin. Well done :)

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ehnel April 16 2006, 16:36:37 UTC
Thanks! :D

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hibernater April 16 2006, 16:23:38 UTC
Makes me think of Eustace in Narnia. Do you know what I'm talking about?

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ehnel April 16 2006, 16:36:26 UTC
I noticed that similarity myself, just after I'd written it. *facepalm*

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josanpq April 16 2006, 18:38:56 UTC
Oh! Sorry, baby, it doesn't work that way. Poor kid.

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agnes_bean April 16 2006, 22:35:16 UTC
Oooo…disturbing but cool. Thank you. What a great response to my prompt!

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ehnel April 17 2006, 15:03:49 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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helzebel April 16 2006, 23:14:43 UTC
Wow... very heartfelt and realistic. I love it. It seems so universal, and yet so IC. Very well done. :)

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ehnel April 17 2006, 15:03:58 UTC
Thanks! :D

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