Comments | mcsmooch: At Last

jaekayelle in mcsmooch

At Last

Apr 01, 2008 20:36

At Last

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( cold and clammy )

author:jaekayelle

Comments 47

xanthe April 2 2008, 21:36:41 UTC

Beautiful!

jaekayelle April 2 2008, 22:25:58 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

(As are your babies. ♥)

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jaekayelle April 3 2008, 02:10:38 UTC

Thank you!

order_of_chaos April 3 2008, 08:52:22 UTC

Awwwww. Much squee!

jaekayelle April 3 2008, 15:07:59 UTC

Yay! :)

propinquitine April 3 2008, 20:49:26 UTC

Oh! This is just lovely, the way you shift the tension and apprehension back and forth between the two of them until it all sighs out into a kiss. Mmmm, simply wonderful.

jaekayelle April 3 2008, 22:03:26 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

aurora_84 April 3 2008, 22:16:08 UTC

Mmmmm, this was absolutely gorgeous!

jaekayelle April 4 2008, 00:07:45 UTC

:) Thank you!