Comments | mcsmooch: The Next Step

jaekayelle in mcsmooch

The Next Step

Jan 17, 2010 16:45

Title: The Next Step
Author: Jae Kayelle
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: the characters belong to MGM. No copyright infringement intended. No profits made from this work of fiction.
Summary: John confuses Rodney.
Word count: 516

( Read more... )

author:jaekayelle

Comments 28

altyronsmaker January 17 2010, 23:13:19 UTC

Okay. Yeah. kissing the fingers. um. *lost it!* that was hot and tender and wonderful and Rodney confused but letting it happen...*shivers* yeeeeaahh. NICE.

jaekayelle January 18 2010, 00:07:36 UTC

Hee! Thank you!

darkhavens January 17 2010, 23:39:43 UTC

Since Rodney so far seemed unaware that they had been courting for the last few years, it was about to get a lot more fun.

LOL! Oh, yes indeedy, now the fun starts. *g* Adorable.

jaekayelle January 18 2010, 00:08:43 UTC

Let's hope they have lots of fun. ;-)

Thank you!

helenkacan January 18 2010, 02:06:12 UTC

Drawing the hand upwards John met it halfway and bent over it, his lips brushing the spot where the skin was marred. It felt hot where the tip of his tongue flicked over it.
Mmmmmmmmmmm. Especially the tip of the tongue bit. Quite unexpected. And made me verrrrrry happy.

jaekayelle January 18 2010, 22:33:14 UTC

:D Thank you!

mezzo_cammin January 18 2010, 02:44:20 UTC

Oh, that was sweet! Kissing it better! Poor, oblivious Rodney, about to get a clue, it looks like! \0/

jaekayelle January 18 2010, 22:36:18 UTC

Thank you! You gotta love Rodney when he's oblivious. *g*

outsideth3box January 18 2010, 02:52:28 UTC

I love John being totally hypervigilant where Rodney's concerned. And what a sweet kiss-it-better. Mmmmm!

jaekayelle January 18 2010, 22:37:42 UTC

Yup. John is always watching out for his Rodney. :)

Thank you!