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kiss by asyouleft

Jan 03, 2010 18:33

Kiss

399 words | fluff | PG | unbeated (and completely unoriginal title!) (Also, I so can't resist writing these. :>)

( kiss )

author:asyouleft

Comments 26

juniperphoenix January 4 2010, 00:39:17 UTC

Aw! I love how surprised and happy John is.

asyouleft January 4 2010, 00:44:43 UTC

Hee, surprise Rodney kisses just sound wonderful on principle alone!

sheafrotherdon January 4 2010, 00:40:42 UTC

ha, oh, this is lovely!

asyouleft January 4 2010, 00:45:20 UTC

Hee, thank you! (And thank you for opening the community up on a week I have unlimited amounts of fic writing time. :>)

esteefee January 4 2010, 00:46:40 UTC

Aw! Quick and sweet and totally shocked Colonel McLazyPants into smiling so happy! \o/ Go bold Rodney!

asyouleft January 4 2010, 00:51:22 UTC

Hehe Colonel McLazyPants. :>

esteefee January 4 2010, 01:12:58 UTC

Well, but they are undeniably so! Too lazy to stay up most of the time. ~:

asyouleft January 4 2010, 01:15:55 UTC

lmao, his hips are very ~slinky, therefore his pants have no choice to be lazy and fall down! (Rodney is always there and ready to assist in any pants related troubles!)

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gottalovev January 4 2010, 01:06:32 UTC

lovely! I'd smile too =D

asyouleft January 4 2010, 04:31:27 UTC

Hee, thanks. :D

altyronsmaker January 4 2010, 01:34:29 UTC

that's adorable. I really like the pace of the text - like the circuitousness of Rodney's brain! Excellent!

And John's little "Oh" of pleased surprise is just icing on the cake.

Lovely!

asyouleft January 4 2010, 01:38:08 UTC

Thank you very much! :)