Fic + Art: At Liberty

[danceswithgary]

Title: At Liberty
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 960
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: John surrenders. A little kissing and cliché for mcsmooch.

Comments

[starry_diadem]

This is great. The beginning is heavy with anxiety and fear, and it all lightens the moment that Rodney's eyes "crinkle at the corners with the same pleasure that lifts the corners of his kissed-red mouth". Lovely line.

Edited to corret spelling. it's too early in the morning here!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much! It was fun building on the cliche and I'm glad you liked the construction. :-D

[fanficfan]

Very nice. And the artwork complements this so well.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks! The artwork actually came first, then I started thinking about how they reached that point. Glad you liked it! :-D

[tipsywitch]

What an excellent way to start the day - this is lovely! Thank you.

[danceswithgary]

Thanks the kind words and for the prompt! I'm so glad you enjoyed what I did with it. :-D

[nuetronorange]

Lovely story, just what I like, Rodney whump, John comfort and kissing!!! Thanks

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much for the lovely comment as well as the rec in rodneymckayhc! *twirls*

[danceswithgary]

It's always nice to hear I cheered someone up - thanks! :-D