Model Behavior

[danceswithgary]

Title: Model Behavior
Author: danceswithgary
Pairing: Rodney McKay/John Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1500
Archive: Fine, just let me know
Summary: "That's funny. I always thought not wearing any clothes meant you were nude." Set in the Screen Savor 'verse, but may be read as standalone.

Comments

[outsideth3box]

I want to say that was really pretty. The way you used words to make a picture. A really lovely picture.

I adored how Rodney knew just what to do to put John into a relaxed space and be all pliable and soft. And I love them laughing together, it's one of my favorite things.

[danceswithgary]

I've always thought being able to laugh with someone adds to the pleasure. Glad you enjoyed and thanks! :-D

[helenkacan]

I just woke up (after only TWO hours which makes me want to growl), but then I got the opportunity to read this precious and precise arrangement of words which has left me with tears in my eyes. I, personally, love a universe where Rodney manages to transform his underappreciated passion (can we agree to kill his last piano teacher) into a delicate awareness of just about everything, especially if that everything is something that Rodney already feels passionate about. [Oh, hai, Jon.]

Thank you seems far too inadequate, but thank you.

[danceswithgary]

I really loved writing something that lets them take explore and please each other. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! :-D

[theeverdream]

I believe my brain has gone blublubblub out my ears.

You did such wonderful things with those prompts!

[danceswithgary]

Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it! :-D

[melagan]

All of this was a sensual feast. Yummmmmm

[danceswithgary]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks! :-D

[gottalovev]

I loved the flow of this, and the vivid images you painted for us. gorgeous!

[danceswithgary]

I do enjoy writing descriptive pieces like this - glad you liked it. Thanks!