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mayachain in mcsmooch

Fic: sing out of tune

Apr 26, 2009 20:27

title: sing out of tune
rating: PG
word count: ~740
companion piece to: gonna try, with a little

( featuring Samantha Carter )

author:ms_jvh_shuh

Comments 36

chkc April 27 2009, 01:37:55 UTC

Awwww. It's amazing how John rapidly transforms after just one little gesture. <3

mayachain May 1 2009, 19:04:36 UTC

It's his own fault for running off like that, making him wait in dread :)
Thank you!

kathgrr April 27 2009, 01:52:54 UTC

awww... hehe and Sam's little exasperated thought "the nerve!" but still proud like a mother lioness over her cubs =)

mayachain May 1 2009, 19:05:05 UTC

Thank you!

julietink April 27 2009, 09:22:35 UTC

Aw, bless them :)

mayachain May 1 2009, 19:05:21 UTC

Yay!

itsjustgwen April 27 2009, 22:12:47 UTC

You really packed a lot of tension in your short paragraphs. I love stories like this that make you go back and read them again.

mayachain May 1 2009, 19:05:46 UTC

*feels honored*
Thanks!

onlystarchild April 28 2009, 18:54:28 UTC

This is the perfect follow up and I really like these stories being told from the perspective of an outsider looking in. And SG-1 *knowing* and silently conspiring and covering up for John and Rodney ... oh my goodness! So much love!

And the last paragraph? Utterly perfect. Wonderful job! <3

mayachain May 1 2009, 19:06:33 UTC

They don't know specifics, but they know enough, and it's all they need :)
Thank you!