Comments | mcsheplets: Challenge #22 Fic: Love Letter (G)

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Challenge #22 Fic: Love Letter (G)

Jun 30, 2008 18:57

Written for the #22 Challenge - Written Words

Title: Love Letter
Author: ( Read more... )

genre: established relationship, challenge: 22 - written words, rating: g, genre: romance, author: neevebrody

Comments 55

equusentric June 30 2008, 23:41:05 UTC

*is a melty puddle*

neevebrody July 1 2008, 04:15:17 UTC

*scoops you up* Did you find the 1st person hard to read?

equusentric July 1 2008, 04:17:35 UTC

Not at all. It surprised me (first person always does at first LOL) but it flows well.

unaccompanied_g July 1 2008, 00:13:12 UTC

Oh, oh John. *happy sigh*

neevebrody July 1 2008, 04:16:00 UTC

Yes. Thank you!

adafrog July 1 2008, 00:20:52 UTC

So wonderful!
the one that says I better talk fast and get to the point or there'll be finger snapping next.
lol Loved this bit.

neevebrody July 1 2008, 04:17:34 UTC

Oh thank you. Dear Rodney and his finger snapping!

ladyoflisquill July 1 2008, 00:24:00 UTC

"But, we're not…" He looks down at our hands and rubs his thumb across my ring finger. My stomach starts to knot up again. "I mean, it's not as if…"

Oh I love this bit.

neevebrody July 1 2008, 04:19:05 UTC

Oh, thank you, but I can't take full credit - one of my betas is responsible for that idea. But I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

ladyoflisquill July 1 2008, 17:27:07 UTC

Well if that isn't a good enough reason for a round of 'hug your beta' I don't know what is.

neevebrody July 1 2008, 17:32:21 UTC

I heartily agree!

melagan July 1 2008, 00:26:55 UTC

You made me Awwwwww, because John would do something like this before he'd ever talk about

neevebrody July 1 2008, 04:23:13 UTC

Yep, and you know he would not have wanted to tell Rodney at all, but there was no way not to. I really believe John would do this.