A Ficlet... The First Time Ever... For the First Challenge (R)

[neevebrody]

The First Time Ever…

"No, Rodney.  I told you I don't want to."  John sounded aggravated.

"But… okay. But, just this once.  You don't have to-"

God damn it, Rodney, how many ways can I say it - no!"  Anger flickered in John's eyes, and Rodney felt John stiffen before he pulled away.  Rodney cautiously moved closer, but John rose from

Comments

[velocitygrass]

to expand John's musical appreciation beyond country and surf-punk
Hehe.

"It's just that, well, I don't dance," John said, shuffling his feet.
Awwww.

Lovely image of them dancing. And this was pretty hot:
their bodies twined together, moving against each other to the urgent backdrop of the music

PS: I added your author tag and also rating (I took R, wasn't sure, but better safe than sorry, I guess).

[neevebrody]

Thanks, glad you liked it. Thanks for the tag, too and yeah, even though it's kinda warm and fuzzy, R for body parts and rolling around is probably safe.

[terribilita]

Aww, this is so sweet. With John's reaction at the beginning, I really didn't expect that the first time thing would be dancing. Nicely done. :)

[neevebrody]

I'm glad you liked it. It's nice to know my bit of misdirection worked.

[_bettina_]

Sweet! :-)

[neevebrody]

Thank you!

[neevebrody]

Thanks for your nice comments. Glad you liked it. Sweet Rodney, doesn't take too much to make him happy.

[girly_curl_3]

Aww, lovely.

[neevebrody]

Hey thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ;)