Comments | mcsheplets: Challenge #32 Fic: Focus Loci, ultimatemarysue, nc-17

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Challenge #32 Fic: Focus Loci, ultimatemarysue, nc-17

Nov 15, 2008 02:15

Title: Focus Loci
Author: ultimatemarysue
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Rating: nc-17
Spoilers: none
Word count: 1851
Summary: John wonders why they've never had sex in a bed and seeks to rectify the situation
Note: I didn't mean to write the schmoop at the end, but I kinda like it. I hope you kinda like it, too!

( Their first time had been out on the east pier in the wee hours of the morning )

rating: nc-17, genre: established relationship, author: ultimatemarysue, pairing: john/rodney, genre: first time, challenge: 32 - bed

Comments 11

cookiemom6067 November 15 2008, 07:43:57 UTC

this was funny and sweet and hot - well done!

ultimatemarysue November 15 2008, 07:45:09 UTC

Kinda totally what I was going for! I'm glad you liked! :)

redsnake05 November 15 2008, 08:27:36 UTC

Oh, Rodney, darling, you totally have an image to maintain... and I'm sure John loves watching you browbeat your minions while thinking about cuddles and hand-holding in bed. What a lovely fic *hums happily*

tarlanx November 15 2008, 11:14:34 UTC

So sweet :-D Hope John teases him mercilessly about the shower singing :-)

still_the_given November 15 2008, 12:37:22 UTC

the thing is i can actually see rodney poppin out some moves on the air guitar. lol loved the story

goddess47 November 15 2008, 20:51:47 UTC

I didn't mean to write the schmoop at the end, but I kinda like it. I hope you kinda like it, too!

You can write all the schmoop you want if it comes out like this..... Fun!