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TEAM WAR: Swan Song, "Except For a Few Small Bruises"

Sep 22, 2009 19:45

Title: Except For A Few Small Bruises
Author: justbreathe80 ( interview)
Team: War
Prompt: Swan Song
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: None
Summary: He'd been living like this long enough to know what being scared felt like, and yet this wasn't like any of that. Rodney hadn't wanted to know so that he could hurt John or laugh at him or pigeon hole ( Read more... )

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busaikko September 23 2009, 04:36:26 UTC

I love where you took this! I just got sucked right in and couldn't stop reading. Thank you!

scififreak September 23 2009, 05:02:48 UTC

Like someone else said, I love college AUs. This one was very well done. I wish I could see who John (and Rodney) grows up to be in this universe.

my_scheherazade September 23 2009, 07:32:53 UTC

This was awesome. I little warm and fuzzy, and a little heartbreaking. Beautifully written, with a good handle on the prompt and the characters. I loved every bit of this.

antares04a September 23 2009, 09:02:06 UTC

This is a wonderful AU. And Rodney giving John the strength not only to rebell against his father (in a rather adolescent way) but to decide what he really wants in life, is great.
It's nice to read that John finally found a home that is a real home for him even if there are only old couches that smell like doritos. *g*
Very nice!

almostnever September 23 2009, 12:13:32 UTC

Naw. I'm so fond of AUs set on Earth, and school AUs.