TEAM PEACE: Alter Ego, "Till It Shines (The Secret Life of Rodney McKay)"

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Title: Till It Shines (The Secret Life of Rodney McKay)
Author: wesleysgirl
Team: Peace
Prompt: Alter Ego
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: In an alternate universe where John Sheppard is a science fiction writer, he's getting his ass kicked by writer's block and moves to a small town in Maine for a fresh start in the form of one

Comments

[emeraldsword]

oh, a lovely AU! Nicely paced, very in character and really enjoyable. I also loved the way that Rodney broke John's writer's bloke by suggestion how Joe would feel if someone threatened the team - that was a lovely idea.

[wesleysgirl]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)

[wanted_a_pony]

This is such a fun AU! Like ^^others^^ said, I'd love to read more about "Dr. Science & his band of secret henchkids"! I almost LOLed about the minors & their shovels, & hats & scarf hung on hooks-do they make John the handsome price who wakes Rodney with a bit more than kisses?!? In any case I enjoyed this a lot; thanks for sharing.

[wesleysgirl]

Yay, thank you! I love the idea of Rodney with all those kids.

[propinquitine]

This was great, and a really neat take on the prompt! I loved how you worked various characters into the AU, especially Woolsey-the-mechanic. :D

[wesleysgirl]

Thank you! :-)

[clavally]

I loved pretty much everything about this story. It just struck a note somewhere inside. Loved the tone, the scenes, the story, all of it.

*hugs it close*

[wesleysgirl]

Thank you so much!

[brightknightie]

This story is nicely satisfying. I enjoyed the slow putting together of the pieces of Rodney's oddness, the agoraphobia, the children, the cold weather, the "not mine" of the rented house. Thank you for sharing it.

[wesleysgirl]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.