TEAM PEACE: Creature Comforts, "Bargaining"

[fluffyllama]

Title: Bargaining
Author: elementalv ( interview)
Team: Peace
Prompt: Creature Comforts
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: R
Warnings: None, other than men being men and Ancient tech being Ancient tech.
Summary: “Broken. Dick.”.

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Comments

[antares04a]

*lol* Very nice!

There are so many parts that make me laugh out loud: the two dozen playstations only for the military, helpless Radek, John undressing and climbing into that "thingy" before Rodney has a change to talk to him, and Rodney offering chocolate for Colonel McGene and the whole playful banter between the two of them. Very lovely!

[danceswithgary]

Okay, that had me giggling more than once. Creative paperwork and sex tables FTW!

[eccentricweft]

This is hilarious! I love the banter, and this is priceless:

He suspected he’d just had a whatsit - an epiphany - and he figured that maybe he should tell Heightmeyer about it while the thought was still there. Then he realized she would ask him how he felt about it, and that would shoot his day all to hell.

[chkc]

The moment I read your summary, I went like this: :D

I also love the idea of John using business people-speak to persuade the IOA to supply, ahem, vitally important supplies. <3

[rissabby]

I really liked the voice you used for John's POV. It came across both as a fresh take and something that stayed in character.

I loved John feeling good about using his family training when filling out paperwork. That seemed new and cool. I hope that canon John found something like that for himself.

Humorous fics are a favorite of mine. And, I definitely enjoyed yours.