TEAM PEACE: Balance of Power, "(Murphy's) Laws Of War"

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Title: (Murphy's) Laws Of War
Author: mirasol ( interview)
Team: Peace
Prompt: Balance of Power
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: It is a bad thing to run out of airspeed, altitude and ideas all at the same time.

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Comments

[eccentricweft]

So much fun! I love that Rodney refers to the jumper as John's honey. :)

[chkc]

Hee, this story made me smile a lot. :D

[perspi]

Oh, this was wonderful! I particularly enjoyed the way John teased Rodney...

[onlystarchild]

I love the flow of this story and the dialogue is spot on. And while I agree that towels are dead useful, I would also rather have a Rodney. :)

Very nicely done!

[springwoof]

light, witty, sweet and sophisticated, without being frothy or saccharine. The balance you kept here was deft and sure. I liked how you built the story up in little sections and kept the flow going well, building both narrative and sexual tension with little teasing moments until the Fade to Black at the end. very nice!