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TEAM AWAY: Drop in the Ocean, "Tied Up Inside"

Jun 24, 2008 19:10

Title: Tied Up Inside
Author: gblvr
Team: Away
Prompt: Drop in the Ocean
Pairing(s): McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Sometimes you just need to go away to figure out where you really belong.
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Comments 31

mellyna June 24 2008, 19:01:23 UTC

Great story. I feel so sorry for the other Rodney now! Very well done. Thanks for sharing.

keyairreem June 25 2008, 02:47:21 UTC

I agree! But what a wonderful story.

the_cephalopod June 24 2008, 19:11:58 UTC

Oh, my heart just breaks for the other Rodney, but I'm glad John made it home to his Rodney. Very enjoyable, thank you! cep xxx

reen212000 June 24 2008, 19:40:08 UTC

Aww! I'm a little crushed for the other Rodney, too. Nicely done. I liked the lil bit o' angst in there too.

emeraldsword June 24 2008, 20:13:59 UTC

oh, wow. Ouch, but this was wonderful. I liked the structure and I think it worked really well.

roaringmice June 24 2008, 21:01:54 UTC

Oh, poor Other Rodney! The poor man. That sucked. What timing. :shakes head:

But a lot of fun to read, and although I feel for Other Rodney, I'm happy that things worked out for this Rodney and John.

Good story. Thanks for writing this.